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Topic: SHE WANNA BE A WIFE..lol
Every day she’s with a man, and she wanna be a wife

Who’s the hell gonna stand, to be betrayed all life

He’s in the morning shaking hands with her ex-boyfriend

And at night he comes to bedroom in his hand his knife


Is she crazy,

To live the way she does, to be the one she is... now

Is she crazy,

To make her dream come true, maybe married to you... tell me how

Will you survive


She’s a mobile jail, walking on those two legs

Wanna marry wanna hurry, that’s when your life ends

You will see her with the man whom she used to walk with

Just leave your home and wait… till you arrive


Is she crazy,

To live the way she does, to be the one she is... now

Is she crazy,

To make her dream come true, maybe married to you... tell me how

Will you survive



Those beautiful eyes aren’t as you think

If you believed they are innocent then you started to sink

Isn’t this innocent lady who got you with a wink

After that you felt like... you’re alive


Is she crazy,

To live the way she does, to be the one she is... now

Is she crazy,

To make her dream come true, maybe married to you... tell me how

Will you survive



As she grew in California, living in LA

She thinks that she’ll find a man one day

A man who believes what ever she will say

She will keep thinking till she’s ninety five


Is she crazy,

To live the way she does, to be the one she is... now

Is she crazy,

To make her dream come true, maybe married to you... tell me how

She wanna be a wife!
Oct 3
9:09 PM


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This poem portray women as deceptive creatures....trying to beguile man into marrying her. He think she is innocent but she is not because she is cheating on him.

She believe she ready for marriage but her action says otherwise since she shows no sign of commitment as a single individual she is not ready for marriage....

What man will want to marry a woman who cheats on him....so perhaps she is delusional to think a man will want to marry her even though she shows no sign of commitment to him.

This is my opinion.
Oct 15
10:39 AM

Posted by Candle Light

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VVVEEERRRYYY TRUE CANDLE... :D great job, thx for this

but a little correction, it's not about womEn..it's about A womAn..one individual and who is similar to her, working as a prostitute, and thinking that this is the right way to get married

ignoring the mans dignity, or even the children how will the look to her when they find people talking about her that way, or there friends wishing to be with her :S

mad world..any way, thats my opinion at last
Nov 14
8:19 AM


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